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The Clockmaker’s Secret

Abang Edwin Syarif Agustin
2 min readJan 28, 2025

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Photo by Ahmad Ossayli on Unsplash

In a small, foggy village nestled between rolling hills, there lived an old clockmaker named Elias. His shop, filled with ticking clocks of all shapes and sizes, was a place of wonder for the villagers. But Elias had a secret — one he kept hidden in the back room, behind a heavy velvet curtain.

Every night, after the last customer left, Elias would retreat to his workshop. There, he worked on a special clock unlike any other. Its gears were made of shimmering silver, and its face glowed with a soft, golden light. This was no ordinary clock; it was a timekeeper for the stars.

One evening, a curious young girl named Lila sneaked into the shop after hours. She had always been fascinated by Elias’s clocks and wanted to see what he was working on. Peeking through the curtain, she gasped as she saw the starry clock. Its hands moved in reverse, and tiny constellations danced across its face.

Elias, startled, turned to see Lila. Instead of scolding her, he smiled. “You’ve discovered my secret,” he said. “This clock doesn’t tell time as we know it. It measures the moments we wish we could relive — the laughter, the love, the joy.”

Lila’s eyes widened. “Can it turn back time?”

Elias shook his head. “No, but it reminds us to cherish every moment. Time moves forward, but memories stay with us forever.”

From that day on, Lila became Elias’s apprentice, learning not only the art of clockmaking but also the importance of treasuring every tick and tock of life.

Note: I’ve been wanting to learn to write short stories for a long time. Can you please give me input on this short story?

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Abang Edwin Syarif Agustin
Abang Edwin Syarif Agustin

Written by Abang Edwin Syarif Agustin

Observer, Content Creator, Blogger (Obviously), Ghostwriter, Design Thinker, Trainer and also Lecturer for Product Design Dept at Podomoro University

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